Marcque

It's good. I read it before :D I can't wait until the next chapter. The story has a lot of potential! Keep writing :wink: ~Marc

I was there when you started writing that :D I really liked it, I tried singing it like a ballad and I would say it's pretty good. My opinion. It'd ...

I like it how it is right now. Especially the last three lines. It's touching and most people can relate, because most of us (I would say) have had at ...

Yours truly A. Whenever he looked at me I would always smile, A. I pick up the phone and am about to dial B. When my cell goes off I ...

I like this one better than the first Embers. It's short, but not curt. I like the vocabulary you chose. Such as, you said "scorching" instead of "burning" (I'd probably ...