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Manielski2000

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: EyeSpot - Chapter 1

    Just to let everyone know.. I made one change to the prologue. Instead of: "Alright Honey, just remember it's going to be OK. Just breath and everything will sort itself ...

    Oct 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: EyeSpot - Prologue

    Hi! Thanks a lot for the review. I'll try to make sure that I slow things down in the next Chapter as it is a lot to take in. Also ...

    Oct 24, 2016


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