Mangline

Hi, Mangline here for the review. So, I liked this, and I'm sure many other people would enjoy it too, but I feel I should give my own opinion. I ...

Hi! It's Mangline, here for the review. So, I think you could've done better with this poem. Remember to put capital letters at the beginning of a new sentence or ...

Hi there, here for the review. I really liked the poetry, but you need proper punctuation. You never put capital letters, which is necessary in all forms of writing. I ...

Hi, here for the review again. I really liked how much detail you put into this chapter (Well, in all the chapters in general). I don't know what to correct ...

Ok, I'm here for the review. Your story is very good in grammar and punctuation, and it gives the reader something to really focus on, something to get involved with. ...