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Re: The Real World - Prologue
The structure of it seems a little confusing. I looked and fixed it up a little, this is just a little fix for the structure. Nobody said that my life ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Memories (before and after)
Very interesting, but the rhyming structure is confusing. Are you trying to make lines rhyme at certain points or just anywhere in the play? Good, but not great with some ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Fear
Hello, I find it very interesting to use a variety of fonts and sizes to create emphasis in your poem it really fascinated me. For areas of improvement, I would ...
Oct 10, 2009