Malefica

I do plan to write more as soon as possible

Corrected those. Thanks very much :D

Thank you so much for the detailed review :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I meant for the title to be a paradox. I intended it to refer to ...

Thanks for the review. I edited that bit, so I think you'll find it a bit smoother now. I realize I'm clumsy with punctuation. I tend to add way too ...

I agree that it was kind of fast-paced. I'm not the best with details, I guess. I'm trying to improve that. Also, I suppose I didn't make it clear enough. ...

I don't know if I'm allowed to bump up posts

Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. I like how you started it, not revealing what the boy was running from. This helped to build the tension. However, I felt that ...

Hi Maleficia! I will be reviewing this piece today! First Impressions My first impressions of this piece were that it was quite seems quite interesting and it's intruiging that people ...