Maki-Chan

W00T! I edited it. I now realize how foolish I was with grammar. Luckily, I have improved. ^_^

ITS BEEN FIXED ^_^ Is it better?

thanks! I'll fix the mistakes and add stuff in ^_^ I hope that I can get the prologue done by the end of November, but I can't predict what will ...

ok I will find more words then "the boy" Yuck, that's nasty. =) Other than that, this was a very interesting prologue. PM me when you post more. Thanks ^_^ ...

I liked this, especially the beginning ^_^

thanks ^_ I'll be able to complete all of my reviews once it is christmas brake :D

just to let you all know she isn't pregnant. Something far more interesting pops out.

teaser...

this was nicely written; however I would suggest that you would post the entire part, instead of just the old man remembering part. (I think this isn't the whole thing, ...

sorry I wasn't able to finish editing it :oops: But here s what i got ^_^

please make put this into smaller parts like Part 1 part 1, and so on It'll help not scare away readers.

Gracee can you please post this into smaller parts. I don't have a lot of free time, but I want to read this. Can you please, PLEASE do this :( ...

HURRAY >_< I finally got some reviews ^_^ Hey Maki! I loved the title, by the way. You write really well, but your thoughts lack transition. This is okay when ...

WW1, that makes sense. I learned about that last year in 9th grade. A very troublesome war. I hardly knew anything about it before that class last year. I do ...

I fixed it up. I sometimes do not really pay attention to what I am writting (Which sounds really stupid). Maybe it was because I was being annoyed by both ...