Maki-Chan

PenNPaper & jojo48 thanks for the reviews. I will definitely add more detail to the park scene. I hope to finish this soon ^_^

ok ^_^ I'm going to separate the chapters. Thanks for the help! >_

thanks Irish ^_^ It was the weirdest thing ever! The dream seemed to actually happen, and it was only the prologue. I am glad you like it. Part 1 chapter ...

Thanks Shadow Princess and LordLoredaen for your kind commnets. I am really happy you guys like it so much. I am working on part 1 chapter one. For a little ...

thank you for the very great comment ^_^ I shouldn't write at 3am v_v

sure. I'll fix it up ^_^ the next part may take a while, cause I have a lot to do this week T_Tq

could you comment on my story? Just posted it. It's called "Winged Crossing" In the fantasy forum.

Okay. I really liked that! You know, you always wonder...what if the prince didn't win? I really loved that poem because you never hear anything like that and it seemed ...

Wow. That was quite interesting. I like the shakespearean writing. It makes the poem so much more lovely. Great job with describing the snow. I really liked this ^_^

thanks ^_^ I really am working hard on this. Ummm... if you wanna we can make a combination story. Like a horror story or something.

Its so sweet ^_^ i liked it. Nice job!

erm... I can't read the entire thing on my computer because some of your poem is cut off. Send me an email once it's fixed ^_^

YEAH! I edited all of my chapters except 3, cause I have no detailed review v_v.

Glad you loved it. I will fix those mistakes (Oops) guess that's what I get for writing at 4 am. My goal is to get this done before school starts, ...

thanks ^_^ I am really glad that you liked this. My main goal is to get this finished before school, but I am also trying to fix stuff up. So, ...