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Re: Love Bites, Especially When You're a Plus Size!
I really enjoyed this! It is interesting to see her point of view on the whole love situations and fairytales and all of that stuff. First of all though, I ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Don't Forget - Chapter 2
I'm here to do a review well - of a sort anyway. I don't quite understand the character of Jake - I don't know whether it's just me or...? He ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Don't Forget
“I know. I’m sorry you hate it here so much.” She looked away. She knew how much I hated this dumb town. “It’s not you’re fault, Mom. And hey, that’s ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: .
Hi! So, my overall opinion is that I thought this poem was really moving and makes you think about faith and Jesus. Although I loved this poem there were some ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Excuses - Part One
Hey Temptation! Do you mind if I crit a little? Okay, so I'm gonna start off with the good points and the I'll suggest what you may need to improve ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Stranger
The girl takes steps very slowly and looks all around her. She knows she isn't safe here. Her scars are there to prove it. "This is a savage planet." she ...
Apr 12, 2010
