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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    I am happy to have written something that can make you feel better :)

    Fri Apr 24, 2015 6:20 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Hey there ^_^ Thank you for writing this review of my poem. I omitted words to add a bit more style to it really. It is allowed, as I have ...

    Fri Apr 24, 2015 6:18 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Thank you. :) I'm sorry if the rhythm and rhyme feel a little forced. As I have replied to the other reviewers, I have a thing for rhymes (which basically ...

    Fri Apr 24, 2015 6:09 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Yes. Well... About the lack of words, Wandering Wizard, I thought it would add a bit more of style to my poem. I mean, it doesn't have to be very ...

    Fri Apr 24, 2015 6:01 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Hi :) Yes, I know that I have skipped a lot and misplaced a few on punctuations. Haha. I am really sorry about that in a way though. I didn't ...

    Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:52 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Hi, Savvy! Thank you for telling me all this. I just thought that generalizing the feeling would make it more "read-able" for many but that's what I mostly do: tend ...

    Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:46 pm


Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream.
— Mark Twain