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Maggie Elims Denise

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    I am happy to have written something that can make you feel better :)

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Hey there ^_^ Thank you for writing this review of my poem. I omitted words to add a bit more style to it really. It is allowed, as I have ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Thank you. :) I'm sorry if the rhythm and rhyme feel a little forced. As I have replied to the other reviewers, I have a thing for rhymes (which basically ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Yes. Well... About the lack of words, Wandering Wizard, I thought it would add a bit more of style to my poem. I mean, it doesn't have to be very ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Hi :) Yes, I know that I have skipped a lot and misplaced a few on punctuations. Haha. I am really sorry about that in a way though. I didn't ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Never Can You Fix Me

    Hi, Savvy! Thank you for telling me all this. I just thought that generalizing the feeling would make it more "read-able" for many but that's what I mostly do: tend ...

    Apr 24, 2015


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