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Thanks so much, oh I see what you're saying and you're completely correct, I'll definitely look at that. I think extending her thoughts will definitely help understand the character better. ...

Those are fairly good points, I'll try to build the tension more and to make my protagonist more understood. Elaborating on the background would make more sense, I agree. Thanks ...

I understand completely what you're saying, and when editing it I'll make sure to keep that in mind(: Thanks for the input.

Thank you so much, I'll really re-analyse my grammar.

Thanks for the input, I understand what you're saying and I agree with most of it, I'll definitely take it into account when I edit and redo it. I'm really ...

In my opinion, stories aren't the hardest thing to put into words - phrasing your thoughts are. To be able to write something to an extent that an everyday thought ...