Mageheart

Thank you so much for your review! I know you didn't feel too confident about it, but it was really helpful.

Thanks! :)

Thank you so much! :)

Thank you so much for your review! It was definitely helpful. It was also really cool seeing what you though of my writing's progression. Description is something I've tried working ...

Thank you so much for your review! It was definitely helpful. It was also really cool seeing what you though of my writing's progression. Description is something I've tried working ...

They really do! They also have less romance-related drama, which is something I've never really been a fan of. And don't worry about it! I misinterpret things all the time, ...

Thank you for reviewing this chapter - and this entire story! I'm really grateful for your insight.

Thank you for reviewing this chapter - and this entire story! I'm really grateful for your insight.

Thank you for your review! :) I'll make sure to establish Mary's POV faster in the next draft. I'll also try to keep on top of that when it comes ...

Thank you for your review! :) I won't say if your guesses on Freddy are right, but I love reading your thought process. I hope the future chapters keep you ...

Thank you for your review! I wasn't able to reply to it yesterday, but it made me eager to write more of this story. It was neat seeing how you ...

Thank you for your review! I've hopefully gotten better with showing vs. telling since I last wrote this story, but I really appreciate you pointing it out here. It's good ...

Thank you for your review! :) I will be coming back to read the rest of the novel! I just have one question... Where did she get her hair dye? ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed this first chapter, and I'm happy you liked it so much that you continued reading the story. I definitely ...

Thank you for your review! I'm not sure my reply can do it justice, but I'm glad you enjoyed my chapter. I'm also grateful that you went so in-depth in ...