Mageheart

It was me who you talked about hyphens. I'll look back at the story to make sure I corrected them all and took out the unnecessary hyphens. I'm glad that ...

And the fang is a drop item...The realm this story takes place in is very similar to a video game. When a monster is killed, they leave behind remnants of ...

The idea of using numbers is genius, by the way.

Oh, that "Where those two your friends?" line is in last tense because Zarith and Oona had gone farther ahead. Neither Schadel or Chi were able to see them.

Thanks! I've read through all of the grammar advice, and I'll fix it once I get some free time. :D Alright. From now on, the necromancer-for-hire needs to be more ...

Yeah! I love nitpicky reviews! :D Thanks for all of the advice. When I get some free time I'll go through and do some good old editing. I really do ...

Also, three more things. I'll revise it when I get the chance, and if you want to read more of my work go check out Schadel: Chapter 1! And the ...

Thanks for all the grammar advice! I really appreciate it! I'm my own editor, and I'm still learning about grammar. But I'm glad that you like it!

You're welcome. And it really was helpful-I had totally missed those mistakes!

Hello, Artemis! First things first, thanks for the review! That's just something I do on here. I guess its just something that helps be focus a little better. I did ...

You're welcome!

It's fine. It's strange. I think I love the theories and story behind it-It also makes awesome fanfiction material! XD

You're welcome! That's interesting-I would have guessed that to be something that a lot of people picked up on! Thanks. Hopefully that promise transforms into some good talent! :D

You're welcome! I'm also someone who writes on fanfiction.net, so I've posted my fair share of stories that do something weird. Like not having a space in between paragraphs... To ...

This is an interesting take on Rome. I would have never thought of writing something like this. Oh yeah. My name is TheLearningWriter. Nice to meet you! Anyhow, back onto ...