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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Seven

    Hi, LadyEvvy! Ooh, this is the first review! Neat! :D Something tells me that Margaret is going to be forced to take part in freeing Neil. I hope she frees ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Forever Sisters

    Hi, Firelight! I'm Magestorrow, but you can call me Mage. And I'm here to review your short story! I really love this! It was a touching story, and even better ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Oceans Of Inspirations...

    I'm super duper sorry that I took so long to review this! I sighed in relief when I realized that you haven't given it to Mohit yet. I know it's ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: v - eggs in a basket

    Hi, lizzybookclubqueen1! I'm Magestorrow, but you can call me Mage. And I'm here to review your work! I checked the other reviews before to make sure I didn't repeat anything, ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: XY

    When I first read that this was about two pranksters duking it out, I immediately thought of Fred and George Weasley. Not the romance part, but the whole pranking bit. ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Birthday Surprises, Leaky Cauldrons (A timeline)

    Hi, Pompadour! I'm Magestorrow, but you can call me Mage. And I'm here to review your work! This was breath-taking. I loved how you weaved all of the different years ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Game

    Hi, mim! I'm Magestorrow, but you can call me Mage. And I'm here to review your work! This story is really interesting. It confused me at some parts, but this ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott

    This chapter was just as awesome as the last one! You do a wonderful job describing the setting, and I can clearly imagine everything that happens. You also added more ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 1: The Boy

    Hi, nosirrah123. I'm Magestorrow, but you can call me Mage. And I'm here to review this awesome first chapter. I love the mystery this first chapter introduces. It made me ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Other » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Dear People-Who-Are-Not-Shy

    Introverts unite! Although I am occasionally an extrovert-like person... Oh, hi. I'm Mage, short for Magestorrow. And I'm here to review your work! It is hard to face an audience, ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: The Interview

    Hey, mialynire! I was shifting through the Green Room in an effort to obtain the much needed points-2, in fact-and then I was struck by the idea of reviewing some ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hunt

    Hey Amareth! I'm in need of some points to upload a new story of mine, and after shifting through the Green Room, I decided to read one of your works. ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: McDonald's

    Hi @BlueAfrica! I needed to gain some points, and after stalking the Green Room, I decided to check out your stories. And I'm glad that I found this one. I ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Science Fiction Re: Fat Chance- Chapter One.

    Ooh, I really like this story! I'm not sure why the whole Santa Claus bit drew me in, but I'm really glad that it did. This first chapter is well ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Six

    WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA! PLOT TWIST!!!! *takes a deep breath* I'm good now. Well, at least I think I am. Maybe. Just possibly. Just a smidge. Okay, not really. ...

    Nov 5, 2015


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon