Mageheart

Hey there, Blue! My heart's still in pieces after reading that last chapter segment, but I have some duct tape on hand so hopefully that will keep it together long ...

Hey, Blue! I'm here and very, very excited to review this chapter. Kiernan nodded and gave her a hand up. He hadn't said a word since they'd told him the ...

Hey there, Blue! I'm here to write another review. (And to do some rhyming while I'm at it.) My goal is get this chapter and the next two ones done ...

Hey there, Blue! I'm back again to review. Would you look at that? I actually rhymed. This will be my last review today unless I suddenly have more free time ...

Hey, Blue! I'm finally here to review this chapter. So let's get to it, shall we? I'm going to do what I've done in the past few reviews and comment ...

Hey, Blue! I'm here and ready for the promised angst. This is going to be a fun chapter, that's for sure. “Clem’s gone,” Edna said. He was on his feet ...

Hello again! I apologize in advance for how short this review will be. There's some things I definitely want to cover, but it won't take long for me to get ...

Hey, Blue! As promised, I'm here to review your newest chapters. So let's get to it, shall we? Now that Benjamin was out of immediate danger and she herself was ...

Hey, Fox! I'm back again and ready to review your story. "You did it! You stopped their fighting!" Jonathan shouted through the wind that buffeted him, pointing towards a point ...

Hey there, Fox! As promised, I'm here to review your newest chapters. So let's get into this one, shall we? It was quiet; it was almost picturesque; it was completely ...

Hey, Blue! I'm here to review your novel ahead of time, for once. My BenjaminxKiernan (Bennan? Kieramin?) shipping heart died and went to Heaven when reading this, as well as ...

Hey there, Blue! I'm here to do my final review for the day, and let me just say that I'm very excited to get into this chapter. Like the previous ...

Hey, Blue! I'm finally here to review this chapter. Sorry for the delay! Like in the previous chapters, I don't have many critiques - I just have a couple of ...

Hey, Silver! I'm here for my last review of the day. I admit most of this chapter went flying over my head because I've forgotten some of the planning that ...

Hey Fox! Back again for my second to last review. "I will find him myself," he said, walking across the room and taking care not to trip over the robe ...