Madshein

thanks alot for your time this helps me so much :) i get to editing quick and you are right english is not my first language. grammar is one of ...

thanks alot for your time this helps me so much :) this is my first time writing anything this long and will start to edit as soon as possible thanks ...

welcome to young writers society good read hope to read more in the future from you sorry for short review i dont really do this so often and is really ...

Thanks for the comment it helps a lot :)

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that was very good and well written. it was realistic like you could really picture the fight scene in your head.

very good send shivers down mine back. i think i have heard a simler story before is it you own ?

very good send shivers down mine back. i think i have heard a simler story before is it you own ?