MadagascarMaiden

no prob

thanks

good work here is a revew! :D

thanks!

hay, just love this beginning. pls tag me when u post the rest. thanks! :D

thanks lol ;-)

sis you know i stopped this book already. and i have more writing experience than you because i'm older than u. :-(

sis it was supesed to be an emoji. but not all emojis work on this website.

thanks alot sis. ;-)

thanks for the feedback! i know its a lot to take in on a first chapter, to tell you the truth i don't really know where i was going with ...

thanks for the advice

thanks Becka :-)

oh and this is just to buld up some emotion between the characters and her father and brother before the next chapter, but i wont give you any spoilers.

thanks for the feedback, ya im not a very good typist so sometimes there are a few things i miss when revising. il work on makeing some of the changes ...

ok, ive added some upgrades and wrote a prologue that i still have to earn pints to publish. thanks for the advice! :-)