Machupicchu14

Thanks a lot for the review!! :D

Hello! Thank you so much for your review, it has helped me a lot, and I completely agree with the points you make in it, especially about the punctuation, which ...

You are welcome! It was a pleasure reading such an amazing piece of work. I thought your name was Grace due to the title but wasn't really sure about it. ...

I was wondering, have you read "The Garbage King"? :D

Hiya! Thanks a lot for your review! :) First of all, I must admit writing the who after coffin was my mistake but decided to leave it like that in ...

No problem! Thank you and I'm glad you liked the poem! :D

Thank you so much!!!! :D Well, actually, literally all my poems are confusing for readers, because when I finish writing a story I don't even know what's the main theme ...

Thank you sooo much. :D

Thanks for the review! It really is appreciated! I don't know, but I feel that if I put my own view as a writer the poem would get way too ...

I write poetry in Spanish and leave it like that. And I write in English mostly when I'm given poetry to write in school, if not I really like writing ...

Well, now it's a totally different poem. Please write what you think about it :)

Thanks for commenting. I'll take that into consideration..;D

I edited it a bit. I'm not sure if it's a bit better now.

Well done in doing this. It's a excellent written piece of literary work and the message suggested there is one that should reach millions of people. The difference makes a ...

I'm really impressed by that poem Its great and the message that is conveyed in the poem may vary from person to person. It also gives a sense of what ...