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I liked the simple rhyme scheme, because its not forceful it gives the piece a nice flow. I only have one critique. In the last line of the first stanza, ...

As Mattie said, it seemed more of a song to me than a poem. A bit prose-ish, is that even a word? But I like it, that you could take ...

hmm... I liked this, I am not about to shout at the top of my lungs off the top of the Golden Gate Bridge that it was amazing, but I ...

hmm.... I thought the ending was the best. Dickens had this way of creating the perfecting ending lines...I don't know how he did it. Tale of Two Cities wasn't my ...