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  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sometimes

    Hello there, Mahnoor here for a review.. I have never seen any poems written before on this particular topic. In your poem, you talk about a broken soul, a person ...

    Apr 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Celestial movement

    First of all, congratulations on writing such a beautiful piece of poetry. I like the way you started with divulging how we normally describe the movement of the stars. And ...

    Apr 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Shoulder To Cry On

    Hi, Mahnoor here for a review. A very good concept (very common though). Nicely explained. Although, I believe that it could have been much better. All in all, I found ...

    Apr 18, 2015


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— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender