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Re: With Every Step
Hi, myjaspercat! Melissa here to review your poem! I really like free verse poetry and glad that you chose to write this subject as a free verse poem. You had ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: Godfather, Godfather, Come and Collect Me
Hi, there. Melissa here to leave you a review. Short and sweet and to the point, I don't see many grammatical or spelling errors (that should be left for the ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: Two Things That Might Influence Your Child
wisegirl22, this is a wonderful change from what I normally read and review. I love all kinds of writing, but this was something fresh, funny, and thought-provoking. I have never ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: Zahra's Crock Pot
Hey, Dreamworx95! Here to review your short, as requested! First of all, I have been on YWS since 2007 and I have to honestly tell you that this has to ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: An Audience
Hey, there, KindlingDragonsFire! My name is Melissa, I've been writing for 14 years, published one book as a youngin', and now, here I am! I really, really, really enjoy horror ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Difficulties of Life
Hello, Iqratoheed! My name is Melissa and I'm here to leave you a review! I've been writing for about 14 years, so I promise that I'm pretty knowledgeable on the ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One: Untitled Story
Hey there, whoaitsbritt! I'm Melissa! I've been writing for 14 years - I'm 22 now, so you do the math! I like to think I'm pretty knowledgable as far as ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Soulmates - Chapter 2
Hi, LeftyWriter! Okay, I have a confession to make: I did not read your first chapter. BUT...this was for good reason. I strongly believe that, as a writer, if your ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Brothers of Chaos
Hey, @greatman! I was actually intrigued by this piece by the title! And that's a great thing! As I'm sure you're aware, the title is a very important part of ...
Jun 24, 2015