MDockham

I agree with both of you. Again it was a spur of the moment, to see what I could do in a flinch. And I have tried to review, but ...

I like it. Reminds of the quote "Don't wish for something too much, it might just coem true" Only thing I dont think fit is the last sentence, ends abruptly

To me it seems a bit simple. What you are trying to convey is a mighty topic. So let it come out that way. Hope this makes sense