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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sleep

    This I like a lot! It seems really natural. I think you shouldn't change it too much. The only thing I thought was that it was quite long, but that's ...

    Oct 15, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: sixteen

    This is a great poem! It really captures something, an experience. I think the innocence is really key to the way it works. I love the line 'I like how ...

    Oct 15, 2005


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind