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Re: As soon as i get a title, you will know
Interesting idea. I don't really have time to do the line by line kind of crit, but some comments I have are that you really should be showing us, not ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: My dog
Gone Fishing said it all! Your story is heartbreakingly sad! as for the writing bit, There are a few spelling errors, which would be well worth your time to fix. ...
Aug 3, 2007