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Re: Hacking YWS - I
Wow I love it. WRITE PART 2!! It's great I love the way its written and everything one thing when in the chatroom someone says 'so' but you just put ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Unlovables
Hello, I liked the way you built up the tension but I have to say that I was dissapointed. I don't know what you were on about at the end ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: The House Next To Mine
Wow. That was really moving I love it. If you put it to a slow song it may even bring tears to your eyes. It reminds me of some lyrics ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: A dream I had, yet to be named.
Wow. I really liked this it was great. Your clever way of having them both being exceptional artists could open up all sorts of possibilitys for turning this into a ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Finding Olive~chapter 1
I stood on wobbly feet and walked slowly. CRASH! I knocked over something that felt heavy. I didn’t see it coming, so I hit it head on (This could be ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Silence: Chapter One
I liked it, and I like the idea. I have to agree with some of the previous commentors. Your writing is choppy and that gets irritating. When you read it ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Winter.... That was brilliant thanks so much for posting that. I love scripts so I invited a few friends round and we all acted that out! It was the BEST ...
Jan 8, 2010