Lycanstyle01

The windows rattled like rabid animals in a cage. Brief flashes of lightning lit up the pitch black sky. Gerard turned on his mat, his mind blurred with drowsiness. Only ...

This story definitely need more description. In my mind while reading this, I see everything as almost black and white. Also, there are a couple of grammar mistakes. Make sure ...

I loved the mystery and suspence that you create in the story. Also, I think that you did a good job when you jumped out with sudden information that helped ...

This is a pretty good story. Let me just show you a few errors: "Four years had passed since the ancient spell was muttered and changes had come , men ...

As those other people said before...SPELLING. Sometimes it gets annoying when reading something that has so many spelling errors. Like so: "Bob had too filll in te blak or else ...

Wow... This is really UNFINISHED and really annoying me. Ill tell you why: 1.The only thing that offers ANY information on this main character is the title. -"Elf Son" 2. ...