Luxor

This isn't normally what I would read for pleasure, but I think you've got a good handle with words. I just think you should tone down the descriptive parts a ...

Why thank you! That's the best thing I've heard in a while! It's just that the whole thing is twenty-two pages long (but short by comparison to everything else I ...

^Yeah, it was a pretty quick read, but I didn't forget about it for a loooong time...I don't think I ever really forgot about it. That book made me feel ...

Good stuff, Sureal, good stuff indeed. 8)

Thank you very much, and Happy Holidays to you. *sets to work on making corrections*

Haha, that's alright Misspriss. :lol:

There is more, but Eros and Felix don't elope nor does her blood turn him into a vampire (though she worried about that happening for a while). ^.^ Eros' parents ...

You have a very funny, very readable story here. I enjoyed it quite a bit, although I would have liked to know a bit more about Alice. Other than that, ...

Jennafina -- I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for pointing out that sentace...it's been corrected. The story was meant to take place in today's modern world. Felix is a one-of-a-kind ...

Thank you so much for these suggestions. You've helped a lot, even though I just realised I have to do the prologue all over because of something in the plot ...

Hi, Sureal! Thanks a lot for pointing those out. ‘Now, for the first time since his death, Felix felt his throat grow tight and tears spring to his eyes.’ - ...

Thanks! Although, to be perfectly honest, I couldn't care less about Johney Depp...I just like Willy Wonka.

Heeheeheee... :twisted:

Man, this was sweet (haha, bad pun)! I especially liked the " AHH SUGAR RUSH " part.

Inertia, thanks for pointing that out, it has been fixed. And I'm very glad you all liked it. :D