Lunatical

Overall I think this is pretty good. It could use a little editing though and I have a couple of wording suggestions. Only God knows how much time passed before ...

Well, it's awfully short. :wink: The idea seems interesting though, I'd like to see where you take it. My only critique is that you used always twice in the second ...

Ooh, that was very good. I don't think it's clichéd at all, and I really liked the description of how he hated the rain. The only thing I would change ...