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Hi Messenger, thanks so much for the review! This isn't part of another story - just something that I came up with randomly. The couple isn't really being 'forced' (I ...

Hi Shaniac, thank you for the review! Yes, my intention was that it meant Dana didn't hold Caleb close to her heart. Hm.. I don't think the winemaker ever tasted ...

Hi MJTucker! First off, thank you for the review!! The wine was supposed to make them both forget about each other so they could start their relationship anew - it ...

Breaking it into two is a good idea - it is hard to read really long bodies of text on a computer screen. Looking forward to reading the rest :)

Hi Radrook, thanks for your review!! Thanks for the suggestions - now that you point it out, "boss" does sound a bit odd.

Thanks for the reading and the review!! :D

HI SergeantRosie, thanks for the review! Thanks for pointing out the ending, I'll work on that!

Thanks for reading and the helpful review!! :)

Hi Solan, thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! I agree that the ending should be longer and not as rushed - I'll keep it in mind when I ...

Thanks so much for this super helpful review! I didn't think about the dialogue being "off," but now that you've pointed it, it makes sense. It does seem forced, because ...

Hi Jezebel (love the name!), thanks so much for the review! Those tense changes are my weakness - they get me every time. For some reason I always start writing ...

Thanks, PrincessInk! I didn't think of the cats and their nine lives thing hah Also, thanks for pointing out different endings - I didn't think about that!

Thanks so much, SimpleBicycle! :D

Thank you! :)

Thanks for the review, LukeStarkiller!