Lucky_Author

That was really good. Very interesting. There were a few spelling mistakes and such but other than that, it was really good. I wondered what was going to happen next ...

Some things to think about: "Better them than me (need period) Better her mother was yelling at whoever was on the phone than her." (repeating yourself here) "It wasn’t even ...

It was a good short poem. If you made it longer and made it more descriptive, that would be better. You didn't have much imagery in this. Once again, if ...

That was really good. I'm guessing your main character will be the Luck boy. You have so many possibilities with him so use it wisely. I liked the prologue very ...

I don't really get the part at the end where Dimitri starts to say that they're trapped. I don't think it makes sense and it ruins the flow of the ...

Very nice. I liked it quite a bit, but there's something about it that just doesn't click. I have no idea what it is though... Oh, and the purpose of ...

I know that this was an old poem, and you are young, so had to be very young when you wrote this, unless you consider old like last year (The ...