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Re: Chapter one: A Human (Flash fiction)
Like others have mentioned, this has some fascinating potential. It reminds of Brandon Sanderson for some reason, but also none in particular, so don't follow up on that! Well, basically, ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: Introduction
DestinyBlaze, this is an interesting piece of writing. I'm curious as to if this "introduction" is a prologue or a chapter 1. Mind telling us which? A prologue is a ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: Sons of the Serpent - Chapter 1
This is a fantastically polished piece of writing. You have done quite a bit of editing and tidy work and, to me, it felt like it could be a published ...
Aug 19, 2014