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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter one: A Human (Flash fiction)

    Like others have mentioned, this has some fascinating potential. It reminds of Brandon Sanderson for some reason, but also none in particular, so don't follow up on that! Well, basically, ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Introduction

    DestinyBlaze, this is an interesting piece of writing. I'm curious as to if this "introduction" is a prologue or a chapter 1. Mind telling us which? A prologue is a ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Sons of the Serpent - Chapter 1

    This is a fantastically polished piece of writing. You have done quite a bit of editing and tidy work and, to me, it felt like it could be a published ...

    Aug 19, 2014


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling