Lucinda

Hi! My name is Luc, and I'll be critiquing your story. :) First of all, I'd like to say that I think your story has a lot of potential. However, ...

I've actually thought about this a lot. I've decided that it's The Book Thief by Markus Zusak. It has everything for me: great characters, an interesting plot that doesn't rely ...

I'll leave out Twilight, 'cause I'm sure you've already heard that rant. The worst book I've ever read is Warrior Cats (and the others in the series). The main character, ...

I can't say I like Twilight (or the others) at all. I can sort of see the appeal as a beach read, but not as a, I don't know, real ...

Hi! This is a great beginning. Here are a few of my thoughts: The open cart creaked incessantly as it bumped and rattled its way over the windswept moor. The ...