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Lucifer

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dear Suicide

    Hmmm. Good read. Like you said, it's more of a summary than a story. You might want to make it a bit longer, seeing as how I didn't really get ...

    Nov 28, 2005
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Short Story: She's There (Otherwise Untitled)

    Interesting stuff you've got there. I didn't really get the point of the story. Seriously, there's not really much of a plot; no closure to the ending. "she was the ...

    Oct 25, 2005
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Like, ehmagawd! I'm on a roll! :P

    I'm assuming you've written earlier parts that I missed. Anyway. Uh what's the PG-13 rating for? omg there's liek kissing and a hell in it! Naw j/k. I found it ...

    Oct 24, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: prologue to another story /P

    It's an interesting prologue. It makes me want to read the whole thing. It didn't make much sense though. "I'm going to buy a sweater and it will be red ...

    Oct 24, 2005


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins