LowKey

You may have hated it, bu we loved it, or at the very least, liked it. :) Thanks for following through with a conclusion for us. ^_^ Some random thoughts: ...

I'll be the partial echo and say that when I first read it, I read the second line as "all that you expected of me". And it flowed really well. ...

First paragraph was beautifully done, the words all flowed into one another nicely. ‘Suddenly’ is a word that can be used, but oft times shouldn’t. Someone once told me to ...

lol, light devil. Sometimes it takes a couple days to get a review. Don't think it's anything against gay pairings. There are some really good stories on here that never ...

Pretty neat story here. Been a while since I read a super hero story. Going to assume it's the high school wrestling team and that he's young yet. He knew ...

This is based off the song "Misery Business" by Paramore. I don't in any way own that song, it belongs to the amazing people at Fueled by Ramen and Paramore ...

Loved it, Jabbs. On the cafeteria scene, it;s fine as is, but these guys are slaves, right? And they've been kidnapped. They find out they're being pursued by something/one, and ...

Hey there Cool Dude! Interesting set up you’ve got here. :) Love Midsummer night’s dream, so was really happy with your adaptation of it. Love Titania and Oberon in this ...

“Say now, befouled creature of the depths of scum, whatever is your problem, jerk?” ^^Favorite line. Hey, Aet, how’s your opinion of yourself? I think it could stand to be ...

Sorry it took forever in coming, but consider it payback for waiting so long to post it. ;) As always, critting as I go. Darkness filled the room, her vision ...

XD Kylan's lines were awesome. Very funny, con. Had me busting up. XD PenguinAttack: *is now a penguin* Squawk. Now I have an irrational fear of men in batsuits. ... ...

My body crumpled, muscles liquid with pain and I convulsed on the floor. Comma after ‘pain’ yes? Little bit awkward otherwise. ;) They had made a few more stops; a ...

"Introduction to Oceanography" by Paul Pinet. He says the same line in a different way every three or four lines. "My name is Bob." line. line. line. "Bob's my name." ...

Same day critique. I think you’re the first one in a long while to get one of these from me. Clearly, I have other things I should be doing. Said ...

EDWARD: I MUST PROTECT HER! SNOINK: I MUST PROTECT... YOUR FACE! GRIF: WHY ARE WE SHOUTING? INCAN: WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS. XD And... EDWARD: Yeah, ...