LoveableLittleSock

I started off thinking I wouldn't like this, but I did :] So yay, my first critique in months will be on something I liked. First off, let me start ...

Hey there! Sorry for the week-long delay. I don't want to lose my reputation here, so I hope you can handle a harsh review =] “Get out.” I don't think ...

Hello! Thanks for the nice little response you got there. I appreciate it =] How did you get so very clever? I'm super-special. -I love the way you review, although ...

Oh! I just noticed your reply. I feel like an ass. I'm glad you appreiacte my review, and I'll clear up some things for you =] Well, in songs, when ...

I'm the best writer in the world and I hate you all =P No. But, um, you guys have to see that if you aren't honest in your critiques, then ...

Sorry for the long wait. I've actually started this review three times but it always got deleted. I'll stick with this one, hopefully! Things Left Unsaid I was sitting in ...

Yeah. I wrote 22 Original Poems for people as Valentine Cards ;)

I don't want the phone to ring again, I don't want to hear you knocking on my door, No more notes taped to my desk, I just can't take them ...

I just wanna say that the 'monster' thing is a metaphor. Does it not make sense? Teenager girls are horrible, yes?

OH!! THAT GUY WAS SERVED!

I see that this is the beginning of the story. You tried hard to created imagry, which is great. How you introduced the characters was a bit forward, but again, ...