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Re: Us
:cries tears of joy: Nic you're such a sweetheart! *hugs and kisses* But don't think that just because I started swooning, you get a sugar-coated crit. :wink: Hehe! I agree ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: In the shadows
Hiya Libby!!! I really enjoyed this, first off, so I'm gonna crit this sentence by sentence so it can get better. kk? kk. The room became dark as the candles ...
Jun 11, 2007 -
Re: Sea-Calls
I disagree with Baroness Ink, I thought this made perfect sense and it was very enjoyable. Even before you SAID that it's one of those poems that you read in ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: Heart String Harpsichord
:D :D I agree with Writersdomain! Jacques is very charismatic and an excellent character. He's got that very special spunk that I am already beginning to love. :wink: Brilliant! I ...
Jun 2, 2007 -
Re: silent whispers part 3
Bonjour nuttychooky! *Firstly: I will start off by saying that I enjoyed this a lot. It's very imaginative and I could picture it all!* Now, time for the in-depth crit: ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: Geezer's Property #12
Hello Baroness, :D *Let me start off by saying that I enjoyed your piece very much. The idea of the Negative and the sun burning Time was a very clever ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: 3 the evil hour
Hello there, Storm. :) :idea: This was well done, the idea and all, but you don't have it structured correctly. :idea: Here is what I noticed while reading: (1) :!: ...
May 6, 2007