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Louise

  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I wanted to fly

    You are right about your interpretation and I knew that first sentence was an issue but I didn't know how else to explain it. Thank you for your review!

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I wanted to fly

    I totally see what you mean and I agree that it should be more split up. Thank you for your review!

    Jul 29, 2018


We know what a person thinks not when he tells us what he thinks, but by his actions.
— Isaac Bashevis Singer