Lost_in_dreamland

Hermes has always been a trickster and has no qualms about deceiving the other Olympians. He wraps his arms around her to carry her away. She catches a last glimpse ...

His voice is low and pleading in her ear. It speaks of a thousand battles lost, generations destroyed, cities massacred by disease and famine. All the tragedy in the world, ...

Wow. Some of your description is amazing! There's something really strange about it; I love the way it's so Un-cliche. Almost mocking. It's really good, there are a few mistakes ...

Dearest Mother and sister, It brings me much joy to write to you again. I very much enjoyed your last letter. It has brightened my spirits! I cannot wait to ...

A large, crooked Victorian house; three stories high with a sad jagged lawn outside the gazebo porch. Hastily up the wide marble stairs, footsteps echoing, echoing, echoing. I love the ...

There is a house down the street. I don't think you need that first sentence. Just start with the next one. The grass is overgrown, the windows too not to ...

I love it :) It's so true. To the person that said most popular people are not that horrible - actually most of them are (or at least the one's ...

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:12 am Post subject: Breakdown (Helpless) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Anyone familiar with Heartless from Action/Adventur

"I wouldn't do that, if I were you." I love that starting sentence. It throws us into the story and immediately makes us intrigued as to what the character has ...