LostMagi42

Hello! It is review day, august 2011, and what better to do than to review a novel, or a fantasy novel with an amazing start at that? I love the ...

Hello! I loved this piece, and cannot wait to read the second part. The only issue I had was as follows: I walked to my locker and opened it get ...

Hello! This piece caught my attention from the title, and is the first piece tonight that i havent had to quote for errors. The first section, spelling, gets an A+. ...

Hello! I think I may have reviewed part 1, but I am not sure. Anyways, I loved this piece, and It left me waiting for a third, one that filled ...

Hello! For a first chapter, This is marvelous. I love the way you switched genres. At first, I thought it was going to be a romance story, but I quickly ...

Hello. The only thing in the Entire piece that could be changed is as follows: I believe that the sun will arrive tomorrow. I believe that the stars will glisten ...

I absolutely love this story. Great job. *Applause* First off, the spelling and grammar portion of this gets an A+. There is nothing that I found wrong here. Second, for ...

First off, the spelling and grammar section had nothing wrong with it. Second, This story is beyond too short and too vague, even though it technically counts as a short ...

Yet again, a romantic story has brought me to tears. I loved this piece. I am also glad that you didnt leave one of the lovers to suffer without the ...

Well, I had just finished the prequel, but I couldnt stop reading so I skipped over here and read this! First off, I want to say how much I love ...

Hello! I only had one problem that I'd like to relay to you. The part I had a problem with was when you wrote about the purity of the sons ...

First, Amazing story. It was an extremely touching piece. I was in tears at the end. I see no grammatical errors. Well done. I see no spelling errors, again, well ...

Hello! All of the grammatical errors were taken care of, so I really cannot give any advice there. Spelling errors have also been taken care of. Again, I cannot help ...

ok.... the angles thing was taken care of.... the demon blood wolf thing too, about it being a mouthful......... i see no other spelling or grammatical mistakes. The story is ...

I really liked it.All nit picking was done before me. Personally, either make a sequel, or you could even start a novel with this. there is definate potential for a ...