Lordofkittys

Hi, I will hopefully offer you some helpful tips to improve this piece. I think this is solid start, but there are some definite problems. I think the most prevalent ...

Let me just say, great poem! I think your theme and message are well thought out and are carried through quite well in such a short poem. A few issues ...

Great Story! I am mainly just going to write my thoughts on the story and not really focus on grammar or anything. I thought you had a great smoothness to ...