LordXerro

Well, this is exactly what love is. Extremely well written, very likable poem, im guessing. You have very good metaphors. Well thought out, well written, and very fast. 1

You're welcome.

ThNk you for pointing those out, I would have never seen them. And you are correct I suck at grammar and all that :/ But thank you again for taking ...

Thank you, i appreciate it!

Thank you for helping, I knew I had grammatical, spelling, and punctuational errors, I never knew how many I had though. On regarding the MC, I explain later why his ...