LordLoredaen

I like the use of Gaelic. :) I'm really wondering just if the translations were necessary, if maybe they could be left up the the reader's imagination. I know that ...

@ Stella Thomas Thanks for your nit picks! Here's just an informative response: In concerns to the Gaelic thing... well, I'm not an Irish Gaelic expert.... I really can't speak ...

Very well-written! I personally can't wait to see what this story has in store for the future! Write on, my friend, write on!!! ~LordLoredaen

Yeah, got a bit of writer's block on this story.... hope to get back to it soon!

Now here's a question: Should I re-write the bit where Ryle cuts down his clone squadron and change it to where he is forced to kill all the clones except ...

Thanks for all the compliments!! (I'm so embarrassed! Typo!!) I'll get around to fixing that right now! As for the action... wait for it.... it's coming. (keep in mind this ...

That was hysterical!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't breathe I was laughing soooo hard!!

Hey, this isn't a review because I don't have enough time to read the story right now, but in a MMORPG called World Of Warcraft, Loredaeron is a capital... I ...

Ok, I am back from my 2 month leave, and once I have written 5 more reviews, I shall be releasing Chap. 2 of "The Secret of Loredaen Hall". But ...

Intriguing!! You definitely show promise, keep it up!!

Okay I have now written a satisfying prologue for this novel, which shall be up in a bit. Hope that it will be satisfying...

Thank you all for your reviews!! I really appreciate them! Now I'm going to explain some things that you guys didn't understand: Mairi's accent changes depending on her emotions; e.g. ...

I did??? Was it somewhere in the dialogue? If so, I did it on purpose.

Shina, you're advice is worth more than a solid gold exact size replica of the Lady of Liberty!

I agree with you both, this one really needed work. But do keep in mind this poem is ancient. I wrote it like two year ago!