LordLoredaen

Wow, this is pretty good! The title was especially appealing to me because I just happen to be a harpist, although very little of this applies to me (being much ...

Wow, this was great! I really enjoyed it, and, as far as I could tell, minimal grammatical or spelling mistakes! The only thing I really noticed was the Latin thing: ...

Ooh! This is good! Just the kind of fiction that I like! I do hope you write more! Definite promise, really definite! Now.... on to the nitpicks: The girl takes ...

This is looking pretty intriguing! I await more! Okay, on to the critique! Most of all this tree hide history This hide should be hid . no one has ever ...

Interesting story going on here! I personally never watched Legion of Superheroes.... but I did recognise some of the names. Okay, I personally didn't see much wrong, except for your ...

All-in-all, good story! You seem to know what you're talking about, which is always a good thing when writing a fanfic. Ok, on to critiques: Jedi Temple, here I come, ...

Wow, intriguing and stunning!! Sorry, I don't have time for a nit-pick, but I'll just tell you that this is quite a work of art! And this was a dream??? ...

Hiya! Interesting story, this... I'm quite into vampire stuff such as this so logically I had to review it. All-in-all great story! I like how its based in Japan (I ...

I have to tell you that I am extremely impressed!! (however much that means to you) This story was great!! Well written, well constructed, I could find no error with ...

That was a great story! Very well constructed, and it didn't bore me! I just want to know exactly what happened at the end. Are you saying that her best ...

I love this!!! It's really good! The flow of your writing is pretty much unbroken, though at the end you rushed it a teeny tiny bit. Also, the last sentence ...

Ok, I thought it was funny, only one teeny tiny problem : There was waaaaaay too much swearing!!!!!!! I mean, it's kind of unnecessary. And, believe it or not, some ...

Hahahahahaha!!!! *falls off chair in a fit of uncontrollable laughter* Oh my gods, mate, that was bloomin' hilarious!!! You know, it's kinda funny, I do something like that with my ...

Brilliant!! A work of genius!! A masterpiece of this meagre time!!! 'S math sin!! 'S e, 's math sin agus sin!!!!! Wonderful! Loved it! (though there were a few times ...

Angels-Symphony said: Emma! Like I've said, and many other people have said, you're a great writer. But there is one thing you need to work on. The plot is too ...