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youre welcome! :D I like jelly

See, I don't get why it doesn't make any sense. Because theres no jelly.

*gets on bitch hat, but discovers Misty took it* HEY! I CANT CRITIQUE WITHOUT MY BITCH HAT :(

what does this poem have to do with a napkin?

... that is so eerie... ... BUT I STILL LOVE IT!!!

ok 1) grif, i dont get it. 2)both of you just chill out.

squallz! relax, ok? karma said fantasy wasnt their thing, so they couldve critiqued how they would say, romance fiction or horror. Dont get all worked up.

cliched? ive never read anything like this before, which is why i wrote it. and yes, you should be sorry.

so... what your saying is... my regular teacher isnt crazy... what about the one i have on thursday? she let me spin on my chair for a whole lesson cos ...

the beginnig threw me off too. never call a character Clara unless you plan to kill her off!!!!!!! grrrrr

well, im terrible at critiqes for poetry... so ill just say :)

dont we all feel like that at the end of the day? I know i do. Loved this poem!

lol... isnt it something to do with food.... thats what it reminds me of.... YAY BITCH HAT!!!!

alrighty *crakcs knuckles* lets get down to work.

i liked it. And i was honoured to get asked to critique. lol. from what i read, there was nothing wrong with it. Well done. Sorry if you wanted a ...