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It's a great story but I'm just wondering if you're going to develop it. You kind of hinted that you're probably going to continue it. Anyway, review time: "What is ...

Heya, I'm going to review your work. The very first thing I thought when I began to read this is: Hey look, an opportunity for me to study the emotion ...

Greetings Master, I am here to review, as you requested. Two main things, pace and repetition. Yoda, the story gets interesting in a sentence but dies in the second. Maybe ...

Hello Stell, the names Hero... the NewHero. Onto the review: It's a very great story, in terms of simplicity but I think it would be good to have a bit ...

No not that one. That’s their weird neighbor, whose name is unknown and no one really wants to find out what it is, the one next to it. No not ...

Great story M.O. Firstly I'm just kind of wondering what all the characters are like, try build on them. Is Tess dorky or just wears glasses. And where does Alissa ...