Lonelymountain

This is awsome! Is this a real story because it feels really authentic? you've really captured that love hate (mostly hate) relationship between brother and sister. Kambers emotions are so ...

The layout of your poem is amazing, and each stanza really creates a vivid image of each girl and her personality. Usually i don't find poems great for character building ...

I really love where this story is going and it had me hooked from very early on which I always a sign of a Good writer. The characters have lots ...

Hi there, this poem is really lovely even though it is about quite a sad topic. You've done a great job of making the confusing emotions that come along with ...

From this section of the novel i can already tell i want to read the rest, not only is is captivating but very well written and our descriptive language makes ...