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I have to say Rachel. I thought this was your best piece yet. It showed lots of emotion, good job. Hee Hee ~Lollipop~

Good Job! Rachel! I think it was a bit choppy for me too but other than that it was a pretty good poem. Keep Writing!!!! :D ~Lollipop~

Yeah!!! I loved poem too!!! I oved the beginning two lines too! Keep Writing! ~Lollipop~

OMFG!!!! This is sooooo good. Awww! It's soo sweet. I loved this bit: like rainbow nail polish glossed over broken nails You have to keep writing. Your talent could go ...

It's really good! Write more! ~Lollipop~

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy! Thats really good. WRITE MORE!! ~Lollipop and her good friend Flik~ :D

Yeah. Me TOO! I love this too! Good Job Rachel!! :D ~Lollipop~

I like this. Good Job Rachel! :D

Way Hay! This song is the shizney. It kicks ass!

Yeah! I like this! Go you and write more! :D ~Lollipop~

Wow! I love the idea. Its very creepy and it describes the characters fear very thoroughly. A very enjoyable read! ~Lollipop~

Thanks for the tips. I just killed the prologue*die prologue die!* sorry about that heehee! ~Lollipop~

I really enjoyed the revised version. It described everything perfectly. I loved the italic paragraphs, especially the first one. Keep writing. :D

OOH! Can I have the Scissor Sisters one. Please! *begs Emma*

I thought this was a good peom. I liked the first stanza. Hee Hee!! :D