Lizzard

SOMETIMES, STAYING IN ONE PLACE for too long is the only way you can ever feel anything. Like the day I fell in love with Cal for the second time ...

The bell rang and students filled the hall. I pushed my way through them to the art room. Too jagged and not just for an opening sentence. Try rewording it ...

I enjoyed your piece. It was confusing but not in a good way. I agree with all here. You should really play a bit more with the wording. But your ...