LivitheWriter4

I have published the second chapter. That might clear up some things for you.

Oh, thank you! I live in America, so I don't really know much about British English.

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This story has a really good plot and I am hoping that you will write more of it. There were a few things that were a bit off to me. ...

Thank you for making this, this is an almost accurate representation of my depression. Maybe instead of a red masterpiece, it could be a more dark color, because red is ...

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This is an excellent poem, but could you capitalize the beginning of the sentences. It feels like a long, run-on sentence. Another suggestion is to make the stanzas longer (or ...

This is an excellent poem, but could you capitalize the beginning of the sentences. It feels like a long, run-on sentence. Another suggestion is to make the stanzas longer (or ...

Maybe you could remove the extra "g"s off of the end of 'ring.' That might help with the suspension of the story. Otherwise, this is a very good story, and ...