Livinginfantasy

When I first saw this title, I thought this was going to be some terrible attempt at trying to convey emotion. And I was right... it was terribly funny. Nice ...

INTRODUCTION I am so sorry I took so long! Due to my blasted homework and the volunteer work I had to do, I really couldn't make time to do an ...

I think, maybe, I don't like it. I can't make up my mind. It is emotionally driven' and, therefore, as a reader, I can't fully understand what's going on. Make ...

I wish that I could Have a friend that Wouldn't ask me out. It would be nice for once To have a good friend and they Could stay that way ...

I think the only thing going for this is that it makes you think. At least it makes me think. Cause honestly, I have no idea what this is. Is ...

Hello Hola Bonjour Hey Novice! Having fun? I hope you know the 2:1 rule; for every two reviews you give, you can post one piece of yours. That way everything ...

Very nice! A tale about her fall from grace, eh? I'm not going to go into little nitpicks, just the overall impression. It was nice, very nice, but I feel ...

This is beautiful! Great intro; the personification was well done. And I love how you came up with an idea like this for the prompt. Creative. I have no crit ...

Ohhh... very interesting. I like it a lot. Okay, so to prevent from sounding like a broken record, I'm not going to get into those little nitpicks I have sometimes, ...

AWWW! This is incredibly adorable! I liked your word choice and rhythm... and topic. I, also, found no mistakes of any kind. But look - Suddenly here you are All ...

INTRODUCTION Hey Doc! It's Fantasy, and as promised, I've come to review a piece of yours. As you can see, I've separated this into seperate parts... It's what I usually ...

Math? I'd rather take a bath, But the numbers, are as important as slumber. Because, If you don't know what is 1+2, I'm sorry but your very, very screwed. But ...

INTRODUCTION Hey New member! *gives a big welcoming smile* Having fun at YWS? So, I hope you know about the 2:1 ratio; give 2 reviews for every piece you post. ...

Why didn't you tell me?? I feel left out! :cry: Much better I must say, but there are still some minor mistakes. Are you remembering to read your story out ...

Did I ever tell you I love your writing? Your metaphors and descriptions are supurb. I felt like I was the Doll... very good, Pinata. I'm at a loss for ...