User avatar

LiveLoveWrite

  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: A Last Lease of Life

    Thank you, I really appreciate the time you took to read this! I'll be sure to pay more attention to my paragraphs in the future.

    Aug 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Tittie Traitor

    This is utterly fabulous xD

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: A Last Lease of Life

    Thank you for the review. I know that my grammar is rather awful in this piece of writing (certainly not one of my best)! With regards to your comment on ...

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: A Last Lease of Life

    Thank you, you are very helpful! As I said to BiscuitsBatchAvoy, I didn't proof read so I'm not surprised there were so many mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out, your ...

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: A Nerd's Lament

    This poem is utterly fabulous. As a nerd myself (!) I find this relatable and completely truthful. I found it almost humorous (in a good way!) how the majority of ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: A Last Lease of Life

    Thank you for your feedback, I had been awake for hours when I wrote this and didn't proof read. I have a tendency to write very long sentences sometimes, that ...

    Aug 13, 2014


Half goat, half fish, all goatfish.
— OSP Red